I am a Year 5 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Miss West.
Wednesday, 5 September 2018
The magical key
Once upon a time there lived a little handsome boy called Jacob. He went with his next door neighbour called John. They climbed up to a beautiful tree house. It was like they were flying in the most beautiful sky. First John open a beautiful box with red fluff inside. Then John pulled out a key that you could blow through, it was special. Next John blew through it and out popped a fluffy cloud. After that Jacob had a turn. He blew through it and made tiny cloud. So then John told Jacob what to do. Jacob tired and tired by he broke the key John didn't care about that. At that moment Jacob thought of a good idea to change the key into a star. It was so cool. They made many shaped cloud including a bunny and finally a love heart. At the end of the day they sat down in the beautiful sun. The end.
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Hey Lama, I really like your story about Jacob and John. By the way how come Jacob is handsome and John's not. LOL i'm kidding but really like what you've done. Keep on learning because your really good at English.... kind of better than William :D
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